did this in class today just using prismacolor and guache. thinking about mucha and shiele and making it more of a design. please let me know if you have any suggestions or if the rendering is incorrect and i don't see it.
thats really nice benzo, very cool style, i like the white that you've used. what size is this drawing and what kind of paper is that?
very nice piece. I'm not sure if this is wrong or not, the model could have actually have a body like this, but i think that the abdominal area is a bit too long! It kind of looks a tad on the comiky side. I suggest if you want to make it look more realistic. The shadow shapes shouldn't be so harsh, but more soft, and gradually darkened or lightened. I hope I helped out!
There is nothing wrong with using a photo to help you see things.
No one complains about life drawing,
so take a photo.
its easy, and will improve your piece greatly."