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I'd be nice to have some constructive feedback. My main goal was to portray a large emphasis on the girl not the environment~ I did this in about two hours...
I'd say start with the anatomy of the girl before making additions such as the demonic head. The pose you have is one you could easily find a good reference for. But at this point, almost all the proportions are off.
Knowing anatomy is a biggy and obvious.
Globally the problem as I see it in this picture and many like it is veracity -
As I see it its about giving up just enough to get the viewer to suspend his judgement on the execution[quality of art] to sell the horror. Currently its crude and bland and unwanted, probably like this comment so I will shutup.
Thanks for the comment !
I'd like to know what exact proportions are off ? Simply saying the proportions are off isn't really going to help haha. I need a general idea to look out for in the future.As for the pose I'm going for a basic standing pose, her pose is stiff which will mesh out with practice.
I'm having trouble understanding your comment,hehe.
I can completely see where you are coming from with the whole unfinished execution of the piece.It's rough. Once again it's not supposed to actually sell a complete horror story, just a simple character design. Nothing too large and in charge ya'know ? As for the anatomy comment I don't know if you mean "all of it's wrong, fix it." or " some things are off, but the anatomy is not a complete fail". I can mainly see that the thighs are a bit too...rounded ? Not enough diverse curves and tone to them ? and the entire are knee down could use some work as well...haha.
It's just off. Here's reference for the proportions:I'd like to know what exact proportions are off ? Simply saying the proportions are off isn't really going to help haha. I need a general idea to look out for in the future.As for the pose I'm going for a basic standing pose, her pose is stiff which will mesh out with practice.
And here's some for the pose:
You can find many more by googling
Ahh ha ! Now this is what I was looking for ! Thank you very much!
Fial piece, thanks for the help everyone I'd say the main problem was the legs.