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    Critique ?

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    I'd be nice to have some constructive feedback. My main goal was to portray a large emphasis on the girl not the environment~ I did this in about two hours...Name:  Demon Child.jpg
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    I'd say start with the anatomy of the girl before making additions such as the demonic head. The pose you have is one you could easily find a good reference for. But at this point, almost all the proportions are off.

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    Knowing anatomy is a biggy and obvious.
    Globally the problem as I see it in this picture and many like it is veracity -
    As I see it its about giving up just enough to get the viewer to suspend his judgement on the execution[quality of art] to sell the horror. Currently its crude and bland and unwanted, probably like this comment so I will shutup.

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    Thanks for the comment !

    I'd like to know what exact proportions are off ? Simply saying the proportions are off isn't really going to help haha. I need a general idea to look out for in the future.As for the pose I'm going for a basic standing pose, her pose is stiff which will mesh out with practice.

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    I'm having trouble understanding your comment,hehe.
    I can completely see where you are coming from with the whole unfinished execution of the piece.It's rough. Once again it's not supposed to actually sell a complete horror story, just a simple character design. Nothing too large and in charge ya'know ? As for the anatomy comment I don't know if you mean "all of it's wrong, fix it." or " some things are off, but the anatomy is not a complete fail". I can mainly see that the thighs are a bit too...rounded ? Not enough diverse curves and tone to them ? and the entire are knee down could use some work as well...haha.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ChaseNNN View Post
    I'd like to know what exact proportions are off ? Simply saying the proportions are off isn't really going to help haha. I need a general idea to look out for in the future.As for the pose I'm going for a basic standing pose, her pose is stiff which will mesh out with practice.
    It's just off. Here's reference for the proportions:
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    And here's some for the pose:
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    You can find many more by googling

    Good luck!

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    Ahh ha ! Now this is what I was looking for ! Thank you very much!

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    Name:  Devil's daughter.jpg
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Size:  621.7 KB Fial piece, thanks for the help everyone I'd say the main problem was the legs.

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