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Hello, I have this illustration I've been picking at for a few weeks off and on. I started it as part of a video lesson on character design for zombie poses (if I remember correctly). I never had an intention of making anything with the gesture I did after watching the lesson, but after a few free time play sessions with PS, here we are.
Anyway, the pose is from a rugby tackle with some modifications. My trouble with this image varies from composition to motion and on to anatomy. Without planting a seed to steer your crits, I'll just ask for your feedback and advice to make this piece stronger and communicate a bit better. Where should I go, what should I change? I'm open to anything really. Thanks for the advice.
First two impressions: You need to paint the water where the characters are. There should be disturbance, dark reflections.. And the zombie-man's right arm is too short from the elbow to the hand.
Thanks for the comments. Nice, I'll fix the arm. Yeah the water thing isn't touched at all past the initial thumbnail. Adding it was a last thought since the reference image was an action closeup. I will refine the water a lot.