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    Conan -WIP

    This is for a monthly art competition on a website called Penciljack. Basically a ladder system , each month ppl are paired up and pic a topic, then at the end of the month the art is voted on by the forums members kinda like COW here i think. This month was Conan, Here is my entry, thought get some unbiased feedback.
    The drawing is still a WIP.
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    First off, I would definitely look at more photographic references of snakes about to strike. The snake's upper palette and lower jaw look really flat/squashed, and the skull's structure looks a bit off.

    Conan's body looks a bit stunted, like the proportions look more suited for a character who is a classic D&D dwarf then a human barbarian character. I would also definitely push the expression on Conan's face. The situation is intense, but his facial expression just seems to be one of mild inconvenience.
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    Yeah the snakes head lacks bone structure, and conan is abit short in the proportions.
    I also think his left arm (holding the knive)might be shorter than the other.

    Your conan is good though, as in he looks rugged and weathered, not to pretty.
    A good version of the character.
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