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Admittedly this was bit more of an ex tempore, "blow some artistic steam" image, but I'd be happy to get critique on this, since everything is still in a workable stage.
(To those not familiar, the characters are Marvel's Basilisk and The Lizard, with some artistic liberties: https://www.dropbox.com/s/41q4ud3p0ujtph3/lizards.jpg )
Image in question:
Well, IMO you have a nice, dynamic composition with expressive characters. Now, why don't you go further by working on masses and volume to make disappear the "scribbling"?
Another point is that I feel the "bright" area behind the lezard is too bright without any justification. maybe toning down this area could be beneficial.
I think the tail is not helping the composition at all, maybe point it at the other lizard or sth? Nice work so far otherwise
Have a look at my sketchbook:
What I think is most disrupting are the two tangents almost in the centre of the piece: The head of the lizard against the basilisk hind leg and the basilisk head against the lizard's tail. Apart from that, the composition is quite dynamic.
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