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    Period Lady critique

    Hi Everyone,

    I'm just coming up to finishing this beauty off! But obviously I've been staring at it for ages and could use some fresh eyes to give me some feedback and critique!

    Thanks in advance!!

    xLouisax

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    Last edited by xLouisax; May 3rd, 2014 at 05:45 AM.

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    Oh no ;_; how do I display a link as an image? :3

    Last edited by xLouisax; May 3rd, 2014 at 05:45 AM.

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    Looking good, so far. What bugs me most is the perspective of her left arm, and the anatomy of her neck: I suggest to have a model take the same pose. Overall, the colours could vary more, to make it more exciting, colour-wise. Finally, the title 'period lady' might not fit the piece

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    Quote Originally Posted by eezacque@xs4all.nl View Post
    Looking good, so far. What bugs me most is the perspective of her left arm, and the anatomy of her neck: I suggest to have a model take the same pose. Overall, the colours could vary more, to make it more exciting, colour-wise. Finally, the title 'period lady' might not fit the piece
    Thanks! I'll look into that! x


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