Critique Please! New 'Lance A Lot' App Icon

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    Critique Please! New 'Lance A Lot' App Icon

    Hey everybody,

    My brother and I just released our game, Lance A Lot, on iOS devices but our current icon is terrible! I've been drafting some new potential icons but, since I'm an art newbie, I wanted to hear your thoughts on how to improve.

    I've got three icons drafted here. I apologize for the small size - I'm currently at work and this is what I could manage pulling from screenshots I've sent around via e-mail (I can post larger sizes later). I'd love to hear any critiques on the icon or anything art - always looking to learn! I'm open to complete new ideas as well.

    It may help to get an idea of what the game looks and feels like.. The game is bite-sized pixel art game similar to Flappy Birds. iOS store link below:
    https://itunes.apple.com/us/app/lanc...816348233?mt=8

    Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
    Bagelwagon

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    Nice, Congrats on the release!
    I like the new face icon better but my main issue with it is that I can't tell what the other side of the face is. Is it a lance? or is it a helmet?
    How about something simple like this:
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    Just a suggestion. Sorry bout how sloppy it is.

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