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    Game Project Artwork - Critique of works needed/ welcomed

    Hello,

    Over the past few months I have been working on putting together a simple visual framework for a game idea. I have taken a number of different designs from sketch level to final concept phase (weapons, vehicles, enemies etc etc) and I am posting the collection of pieces here in order to attain some feedback on pretty much anything about the work.

    Please enjoy.
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    Name:  Ceaser Frey concept.jpg
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    Name:  Lev concept final.jpg
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    Name:  Lev Early Heads line.jpg
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    Name:  Lev gun concept small.jpg
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    Name:  Lev Heads concepts early double.jpg
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    Name:  Lev Sils line.jpg
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    Name:  Lev Suit concepts.jpg
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    Name:  Morgana concept finished.jpg
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    Name:  Morgana concept sketch original.jpg
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    Name:  Morgana head sketch 1.jpg
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    Name:  Istvan concept heads.jpg
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    Name:  Istvan concepts rough.jpg
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    Name:  Istvan outlines.jpg
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    Name:  Job Istvan concept.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian early concept suit.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian early concepts double.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian soldier costume concepts double.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian soldier paint 1.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian soldier paint 2.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian soldier paint.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian soldier sketch solo.jpg
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    Name:  Atonian uniform concepts.jpg
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    Name:  Atonion bunch sketch.jpg
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    Name:  Outlien thumbnail 1.jpg
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    Name:  Soldier early concept colo.jpg
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    Name:  Techrin head concepts early.jpg
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    Name:  Techrin silhouettes line up early.jpg
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    Name:  Techrin sketch only.jpg
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    Name:  techrin soldier concept final s.jpg
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    Name:  Techron body concepts early double.jpg
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    Name:  techron head outlines.jpg
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    Name:  Techrin Smoker concept sketch only.jpg
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    Name:  Suit concept 1.jpg
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    Name:  Suit concept first.jpg
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    Name:  Suit concept sketch early.jpg
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    Name:  Suit concept sketches right.jpg
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    Name:  Eagle Design paint small.jpg
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    Name:  Ship concept 1.jpg
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    Name:  ship concept 2.jpg
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    Name:  ship concepts 1.jpg
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    Name:  ship concepts.jpg
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    Name:  Assault rifle.jpg
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    Name:  Longbore.jpg
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    Name:  Pistol.jpg
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    Name:  Shotgun.jpg
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    Name:  Techrin Gun Early.jpg
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    Holy crap the amount of images, I think majority of these would better go for a Sketchbook thread since it's just repeating a lot of stuff.
    Overall most of these designs look unrelated, going between more realistic to Stormtrooper and Warhammer 30k, but I don't really see any specific idea behind these concepts. Do you have any images where the actual gameplay etc ideas can be seen?

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    Name:  Artifact thumbnails.jpg
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    Name:  Crash location long paint.jpg
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    Name:  High market 1.jpg
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    Name:  Market stall concept.jpg
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    Name:  Roof concept 1.jpg
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    Name:  Room + Pillars 2.jpg
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    Name:  Scene sketch.jpg
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    Name:  Sewers thumbnails.jpg
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    Name:  Station 10x20 concept.jpg
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    Name:  Station Early new.jpg
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    Name:  Station skyline long.jpg
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    Name:  Tech ship thumbnails.jpg
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    Quote Originally Posted by TinyBird View Post
    Holy crap the amount of images, I think majority of these would better go for a Sketchbook thread since it's just repeating a lot of stuff.
    Overall most of these designs look unrelated, going between more realistic to Stormtrooper and Warhammer 30k, but I don't really see any specific idea behind these concepts. Do you have any images where the actual gameplay etc ideas can be seen?
    Hey man, thanks for the reply.

    I think you may be right in that this thread may be better in the sketchbook section - I didn't think about that. [MODS - if viewing please feel free to move]

    The designs here really just involve the visual style of the world and the designs of characters/locations etc. The only real 'in-game' artwork would be the UI concepts show from a first person view.

    Thanks for the feedback though man, I will take into account what you've said and look at providing a more cohesive overall set of info about the pieces.

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