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    Definitely get some values in your paintings. The last piece is the only one using lights and shadows and it's pretty much filled with values guessed wrong.

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    Thank you for your interest

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    You would get more replies if you only selected one or two pieces and posted them, probably.

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    Is this robot good and interesting?
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    Well, it doesn't really look much like a robot at least to me, it could just as easily be a sci-fi space suit. The shape is very basic humanoid and most of the interest seems to come from the clashing colours, which are a nice idea, but it's impossible to say if they're "good" since we don't know what the context of the design is.

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    Thank you for reply. Yes it is more space suit . What You mean saying context? It is space, more things from his world like spaceship, planet ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by BartLight View Post
    What You mean saying context?
    Well like, what is the design for? Whether it's for a main character, side character or enemy, what is it for (combat, exploration, sports etc), is it supposed to look like humans did it or aliens, is it supposed to look funny, realistic, gritty. Stuff like that.
    You can't always "just design" stuff, you need to know what you're going for and if we know what you're going for will make helping easier.

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    This is demon who is design for "supernatural character " competition. He is enemy.He is a demon.
    My idea is a demon who have wild power -fire and gravity. It has an unearthly physical strength. Generates the flames to the destruction of their enemies, that all the encounters along the way. It is hatred and his desire to destroy it. Its environment is a place covered with sharp peaks of the mountains, stones, rocks, isolation, cold.
    I tried create demon who have interesting look and he have supernatural abilities.
    This is first one but i have idea to create the same demon but in different gesture and whit fire.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BartLight View Post
    My idea is a demon who have wild power -fire and gravity. It has an unearthly physical strength. Generates the flames to the destruction of their enemies, that all the encounters along the way. It is hatred and his desire to destroy it. Its environment is a place covered with sharp peaks of the mountains, stones, rocks, isolation, cold.
    To me he looks more like a desert dwelling Djinn, he doesn't really look like something that wants to be in the cold and isolated. Where did he get those clothes and armor?
    If you want a fire based mountain creature, it might be worth looking at lava/volcano things and see if you can combine those to the design to give visual cues that it uses fire, if that is needed for the design. Or if you want to keep the armor and such, adding some flame embellishments and such could be useful.
    Test out different things, don't go with the first idea/design you get.

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    I did next step but I have to do another one. This lava/volcano thing is great idea.. You are really helpful TinyBird
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    This is one demon in 3 different poses and little mutation. I hope all is holding together. Is it correct what I did ? Is it understandable ? Maybe they are too much different.

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    Animation style ? Mechari. Calculating. Efficient. Remorseless
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