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    Question Merman asks for feedback

    I basically wanted to create a merman so I came up with this guy. I've been working a good amount of time on it already and I think I need a step back so I can later see better what I can improve and in the meantime I figured I can ask for some feedback. Thanks!

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    I think you need to work on the face having a more relaxed natural demeanor. Are you using ref for the image?

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    First thank you for the reply! No I haven't used reference for the face, just for the neck a little bit. By more relaxed demeanor do you suggest relaxing the muscles around the eyes or the mouth?

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    yeah he just seems a little artificially stiff is all. Use a mirror or a friend and pay attention to things like the eyes and corners of the mouth. little subtleties that will make it come alive if you are more careful with them

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    I see now. Thank you for you feedback, it's really helpful! Can you think of anything else I should consider?

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    pay attention to the neck, too.

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    Not for this since its so far along but in the future when you make a portrait think about the pose a little more before you start. Turn the head slightly or the body, and it will give it more life. Think about the attitude of the person how would that attitude manifest itself in the pose? Is he stern? Mischievous? Sad? All those emotions will help connect the viewer and give the image more life. All of those emotions have a way of physically showing on a face.

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    pay attention to the neck, too.

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    dpaint: Yes now that you mentioned it I haven't thought about any of these stuff at all. I'll definitely try and think about those things in the future. Thanks again, mate!
    kayness: Yeah necks are a weak spot for me. Even though i tried using reference it seems more thorough study is in order.

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