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    Color critique

    Hey thereeee. It'd like to reads some advices about the colors. Everything seems so muddy. >.<
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    I think you need to push your values and vary levels of saturation, it seems like everything in your image has approximately the same level of saturation at the moment.

    Consider the light source. Where is it coming from? The light source on the giant robot (?) looks like it comes from the right of the picture, like, a very strong directional lighting, and if that's the case then it needs to cast shadow behind it. I think that's also a huge contributor as to why your colours look muddy - the lighting is a bit confusing.

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    You really need to work on your perspective first. I don't mean to be blunt.

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    Thanks for the fast answer. I'll try to cast the shadow behind that robot thing. It's been a weeks since I started drawing with colors.

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    Yep, I can't deny I'm bad at perspective. I have to improve a lot of things. Where should I start with the perspective?

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    Use round hard brushes with photoshop (or whatever you're using), and use full opacity. Don't even use the other tools for now.
    Also work on your fundamentals like previously said. Maybe get some book like Successful Drawing by Loomis or Perspective made Easy by Nordling.

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    Damn backgrounds. It's really hard for me. I'll work on this!

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    Get more modest then. Simply paint a robot and maybe some very small part of environement. It seems to me like you may have tried to put too much into the same painting.

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    mm I drew the robot first, then I tried to draw some kind of a cool background. That's all. So I'll erase all and draw some easier stuff

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    Do you think it's getting better? ^^ Name:  ?????.jpg
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    It is better but I think you need a bit of help.

    Set values and colours, be careful at how colours react to values. For example, highlights aren't as saturated in colour as you've done it. Do more planning rather than filling the blanks. It's a pain in the ass but you get used to it and it makes you improve alot.
    Also build the structure. Here everything lacks values but also structure.

    Here's a paintover (note that I did NOT fix most issues, just made it to show how to use values and structure to improve the robot). I only used the hard round brush with either 30 or 80% opacity.

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    You're awesome! Thanks

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    I'm working on it Name:  ?????.jpg
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