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    Awesome job on these last two. Your value control is getting better and better. Great job on the sharpness you achieved in the foreground of #10. If you put a sharpen filter over #9 and #10 I think it would make them even closer.

    I'm a bit unsure as to how much to zoom in when doing the details, without losing trace of the ref. So mostly, I keep it zoomed out and work on it as it is. Will have to figure out another way to approach these studies.
    I think keeping zoomed out for these studies is probably your best bet. What I personally found helpful in my later studies was to lay in everything with those textured brushes, then to achieve sharpness, I went over certain forms and edges with a hard round- size jitter on, but with full opacity and flow. At first it scared me, because it was out of my comfort zone and it looked terrible up close. If I kept it zoomed out, it looked pretty good. It sped up my process a lot, I learned more about choosing the appropriate values, and I think it's appropriate for this type of study. I also used the sharpen tool or sharpen filters sometimes. Just something to think about.

    Honestly, all in all, these are really great.


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    Thank you Agerkvist!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Grumpysaur View Post
    Awesome job on these last two. Your value control is getting better and better. Great job on the sharpness you achieved in the foreground of #10. If you put a sharpen filter over #9 and #10 I think it would make them even closer.



    I think keeping zoomed out for these studies is probably your best bet. What I personally found helpful in my later studies was to lay in everything with those textured brushes, then to achieve sharpness, I went over certain forms and edges with a hard round- size jitter on, but with full opacity and flow. At first it scared me, because it was out of my comfort zone and it looked terrible up close. If I kept it zoomed out, it looked pretty good. It sped up my process a lot, I learned more about choosing the appropriate values, and I think it's appropriate for this type of study. I also used the sharpen tool or sharpen filters sometimes. Just something to think about.

    Honestly, all in all, these are really great.

    Thank you so much Grumpy! :o) I´m really glad there is a slight improvement. I will try the sharpen filter and see if it makes it somewhat better. It sounds also time-saving. I really want to get the sharpness with my brushwork though.. just knowing I can do it, makes it better for me to choose later on an easier way. But I will definitely try it out.

    Your suggestion on the brushwork is great. I think the fact I use about 50% fill might be one of the reasons I don't get nearly close to where I should. Out of the comfort zone it is, then. And I'll make sure to try the textured block in (I kind of did that with the trees on #10, erased with a hard eraser brush, but still.. blurry). You're probably right about the appropriate values though, it totally makes sense to get closer to those this way.

    Thank you so much for the tips!! I hope the next ones get closer to accuracy and crispness. :o)))
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    Try blocking out the big shapes with a hard 100% opacity brush at first - it looks weird at first, but remember you're only doing that to get the shapes right, you can soften them up later if need be. It's much harder the other way around, at least it is for me. I've tried just blocking in values and shapes real quick with a softer brush, but cleaning up the lines afterwards can be alot of work unless you're really precise to begin with in my experience - which isn't all that great tbh

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    fabulous job. my only comment is to really double check your edges at the very end as you can go a little soft, like around the trees for example. keep up the great work.

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    Thank you Jason and Agerkvist. I hope this time it's a biiiit crispier. Still loads to learn and tons of practice to get where I need, but, it's coming.

    Next study. Have one week off, so will try to wrap things up as from May I'll be dead busy. This one was done entirely with 100% opacity and flow, as kindly suggested by Grumpysaur & Agerkvist, so I hope it's not as blurry this time. I checked the sharpen filter, but it only made some brush strokes a little too sharp.. I think I enjoyed this approach a lot more - less frustration involved, at least in terms of edges. I applied a lighter middle value than I actually should have, but otherwise I think doing that helps to establish a base to work on making it visually easier, at least for me. The body and head *and posture* are a bit off, and there are also some parts that could use a bit more tweaking, but I spent waaaay more time on this one, so I think that is it for now. So here goes:



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    Anna Ancher is one of the Skagen painters, inspired by the Impressionists, and therefore many of their paintings focus on light. This particular painting is beautiful, even though very modest in its theme. There is balance, economy and unity throughout the entire piece. The figure's blouse is the darkest dark broken by her skirt and being followed by the dark shadow on the floor. The other dark that the eye falls on is the door, although it "washes out" at its end. The kitchen counter's right side is in balance with the low left corner, where the groceries lie on the table, which depict a certain rhythm and difference in size, shape and placement, as well as value and repetition. The same goes for the objects on the counter. In terms of light, there's a similar pattern: lights are being balanced out by darker values, hence also giving a certain rhythmic quality to the painting. Economy is present in various places here, including all the objects on the counter and the table, details and the walls, which would otherwise distract interrupt the eye from running its course around the image. After observing the entire piece, eventually the eye exits on the right where the door is ajar, and the lighter wall serves again as a balancing element for the composition.
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    You've made amazing progress! This last one is really great. However I see a bit of a scale issue. The table the woman stands in front is wider than in the original. You can spot it especially if you look at the right side of the painting. There's less space between the cabinet (or whatever it is) and the edge of the painting. I also think the woman is at least a bit wider or bigger than in the original...

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    The woman's cast shadow and table leg could be darker. . . but overall. . . wow! Excellent hard work on those edges. Looks really great!

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    Quote Originally Posted by TomasBj View Post
    You've made amazing progress! This last one is really great. However I see a bit of a scale issue. The table the woman stands in front is wider than in the original. You can spot it especially if you look at the right side of the painting. There's less space between the cabinet (or whatever it is) and the edge of the painting. I also think the woman is at least a bit wider or bigger than in the original...
    Thank you for the feedback Tomas! Yes, I notice the difference now. I was so focused on getting the other parts right, that I totally disregarded the left side where the wall is. I could see the figure and there seemed to be a shortage of space on the right side, so I should have been more careful with the big shapes and proportions from the start. Or else, this is what it leads to. Need to keep that in mind. Thanks!


    @Grumpysaur: Thank you! Still not there, but hopefully getting closer with those edges. I notice it now, the shadow. Still need to work on those darkest darks, as I'm off by a value or two. I need to be more bold with those it seems. I will keep it in mind for the next ones.
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    Wow you are making great progress. I'm feeling inspired. How long did the last picture take?

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    Thanks for your uplifting comment in my thread

    The progress you made is awe-inspiring, I hope I can follow that route too. The one with the trees is the best so far in my opinion, the values are really close, the edges sharp, just great. And I am sure the next one will be even better ... looking forward to it
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    fabulous job!!

    this is exactly the level you need to hit consistently. great work.

    my only crit is you seemed to have made her torso and head a tiny bit larger/wider but outside that i think for this type of study you nailed it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Ex-Spectator View Post
    Wow you are making great progress. I'm feeling inspired. How long did the last picture take?
    Thank you! I'm still trying to figure out how to approach these. To be honest,
    I didn't really keep track that time. It was... too long to end up with the
    mistakes I made. Worked on it about three days, but not continuously, a couple
    of hours here and there.


    Quote Originally Posted by Vep View Post
    Thanks for your uplifting comment in my thread

    The progress you made is awe-inspiring, I hope I can follow that route too. The one with the trees is the best so far in my opinion, the values are really close, the edges sharp, just great. And I am sure the next one will be even better ... looking forward to it

    You're most welcome Vep! And thank you very much! I liked the Shishkin's trees most, as well. It was quite
    calming to do those, compared to the other ones, where frustration dominated mostly. Thanks a lot for the
    encouragement. Really appreciate it!


    Quote Originally Posted by Jason Manley View Post
    fabulous job!!

    this is exactly the level you need to hit consistently. great work.

    my only crit is you seemed to have made her torso and head a tiny bit larger/wider but outside that i think for this type of study you nailed it.


    jm

    Thank you for the feedback, Jason! Yes, the figure came out a bit larger than it should have, I seem to
    be be off with most of my proportions and I need to work on that a lot. Besides the edge problem I have.
    I also keep forgetting to flip the canvas every now and then, so that's also something I need to be doing
    more.
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    Ok, so I finally started my 12th one. I'm 2 hrs in, and I saved 2 wip shots, as I'm not entirely
    sure how to go about this one. I mostly chose this painting so I could get some perspective practice
    going, plus I love Jean-Léon Gérôme's paintings. I don't know if I'm working slow or I'm not bold
    enough with the brushtrokes, but I had to stop after spending a good amount of minutes on details -
    again. So, just to break this habit and take a break from it for a while. Hope I get to finish this
    by tomorrow. Any comments and merciless critique especially is highly encouraged & appreciated!

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    Great Anna Ancher study Rali - great stuff! The Skagen are from Denmark just like me and I have a hard time mentioning any of them. I should be ashamed. /edit - I can think of one. That's all ><

    Comments on the WIP...hmm...well I can't wait to see those crips edges when you're done Something about the perspective looks abit off, but I can't put my finger on it.

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    Great Anna Ancher study Rali - great stuff! The Skagen are from Denmark just like me and I have a hard time mentioning any of them. I should be ashamed.

    Comments on the WIP...hmm...well I can't wait to see those crips edges when you're done Something about the perspective looks abit off, but I can't put my finger on it.
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