stinkypanda: Kind of prefer the head shape before you started over, this one's sort of veering away from humanoid elf into animal territory. I like the overall shape of the head, but it might be the ears... something about the way they're curled down, or something. It just feels a bit too far off compared to your previous concepts. Those bionic glasses should stay though, really nice.
W!L: Nice, like the shape of the belt you chose. Something about that oversized buckle is just cool.
pheonix561: Yeah, if you're worried about the position of the arm, it might help to get a friend (or use a mirror yourself) to see how an arm would really look in that manner. It kind of sounds like you weren't sure how the joints would turn and had trouble getting it right. Other than that, I'm not feeling the Christmas yet. Maybe the costume needs hints of red here and there or something resembling ornaments. You could probably still fit the badge on one of the apron straps if you decide to stick with this pose/costume.
tylerfontes: Awesome energy in those lines. Really like the upper right. The yellow hardhat is a bit too 'foreman' (although technically I guess that's not too different than a manager haha). Just really like that pose and expression, looks like he's been doing his job for so long that he pretty much knows how to keep the entire workshop under control.
andartarius: Really like the warm colors you used in this. Feels like an actual Christmas card. Pose looks a bit too much like he's prepped for battle rather than a workshop manager, but the twin wrenches are cool.
Wigerio: Great stuff. The wrapped gift is a really nice touch.
Ironbyte: I'm liking the traditional cone hat on #1, the goggles and apron from #2, and the walking cane from #3, adds a sort of regal or even pompous air to the character.
ded: Love this, keep at it. I like how the belt is also a sort of backpack, great solution for having a bunch of tools readily available. Having trouble designing the belt, myself.
Bjulvar: Wow, so different than the other entries. Right now I'm getting warrior more than manager, though. I wonder if you could add some minor elements of professionalism somewhere? Just to convey that he has some rank over the other elves. Not that he needs a necktie and dress slacks; I feel like your character isn't afraid to get on the same level of his subordinates to get something done right. But it feels like it still needs some clear sign of his position.
ilias-saili: Love the tool pouch on the belt; the glasses are a nice touch of "boss lady" as well. I see what looks like a sketch of blueprints in one hand, I'm hoping you'll include that in the final pose. Can't wait to see what sort of badge you come up with.
Pairofdice: Nice! I like how we can actually see him working on something. Maybe make it a little more clear what the something is, though, kind of looks like a basketball? Not sure. If possible I might alter the pose just a little, lower the arms so we can see the badge on his chest. Also, if his ears are going to be normal we probably need to see some other aspect that identifies him as an elf.
Decided to give this one a go, exploring some costumes. Having trouble with the tool belt design.
@noun: Yeah I´ll probably go back to my first idea but I´m still trying to come up with something more original. Awesome sketches btw. Hard to pick a favorite. Bottom left is the coolest IMO but he doesn´t really feel like a Christmas elf. But that could be a good thing!
Noun glad you like it, I'm going with the blueprints also need to sketch a bit on the festive badge which I think is the most challenging part.
Also I really love your designs, they are all so expressive and well designed.
My favourites are the two middle ones, I wish I had made mine as lively as yours.
I used to have him crouching at a small table but then I didn't like the silhouette.
He's a stylish Christmas Elf who is into all little people toys (children).
I'm worried about showing that he is taller than regular elves, I don't know if it is coming across?
Anyway I like Charlie, I'll give him more detail when I go over his third pass.
still trying new things
Here's my rough scribble for Charlie.
I see his badge more like a military decoration, not the cheap looking plastic badge i see on most of the others concepts. just a round badge doesn't look very formal or official. I was initialy going for a decorated brooch but will stick to the chest badge to stay straight to the rules ^^
Besides the tools I want him to have human sized buttosn on his clothes, to help visualising his scale. (i will need to downsize the buttons, and the toy a bit too, Sophie (a chewing toy for babies) is a quite smaller toy in reality)
Also got his left foot wrong, it look weird.
I was mostly inspired by the elfs of Arthur Rackam.
I will comment your works later guys, as far as you are I really like the Ded's design with his modern and young looking elf. The use of a hood like santa is also quite funny/smart.
Last edited by Domergue; December 27th, 2013 at 01:17 PM. Reason: color test wip
I just registered so I could contribute to this challenge. Hope I'm not too late for feedback .
There's some really nice concepts already here. Mongrelcat's tools and Noun's personalities are my favorite. I don't know if I'm alone with this, but most characters don't have the manager vibe to them... Except for Tylerfontes' stuff, can't get anymore manager than that XD.
Here's my Charlie, not quite happy with her yet. Not enough elvish or something else...
I'm new to this but am excited about these challenges. This is my first sketch of Charlie.
My girlfriend came up with this awesome idea of an elf eating elf manager. He eats them when they are slacking on their job or whenever he gets hungry, which is quite often hence the little ear snacks on his belt.
Hi! Its my first time participating in a contest here so i shall do my best
I'm throwin' something in, I just read about this about an hour ago, and admittedly, this topic really isn't my cup of tea.
None the less I'm very out of practice so I'll throw in my doodle completely for giggles.
sorry I'm trying to draw this on my phone, it's still a little awkward...
I don't intend on entering as I'm new to drawing and wont have enough time. I just saw this yesterday .
Had a funny Idea and drew something up quick. Not refined in any means.
ok that's it for me... I'm losing heart on this one...
great stuff everyone, I'll see you on the next one...
ded : love it man...
Hello everyone! These are my very brief initial sketches for this one. I probably won't take any of these to completion, but who knows?
I can't find the finals thread. Meanwhile... I'll comment some of your posts and ask for feedback :P
@ilias-saili: I love your lineart. Those glasses are really nice and gives her a lot of personality. Don't forget she has to look taller.
@Domergue: I like his smoking pipe, and how you show his scale compared to a human's. The first thing you can do to fix his foot is mirror your drawing to make errors more evident, making his left leg more thick and his left foot bigger may help to fix it. Don't waste time in a background, they are not allowed, you can use simple shapes though.
@Hartsitikru: Nice concepts, I like his big hat but be careful with that cuz it would make her look really small and you want do the opposite, that welding tool is great. Nice choice with the badge, try to simplify those symbols so it can be read in a smaller resolution. I'm glad you liked my manager's tools :P
@Hank Stamper: Your elf is really creepy, I like it, does he have little ears on his belt too? lol. Showing him eating another elf shows his scale pretty well :P
@ch103: Welcome! I would like to see a final of that, he looks like a tough boss with a "secret" kind/childish side, pretty nice.
@JayZii: I hope you can finish one of them, I like the 3rd one :P
My first sketch bored me so I decided to change some things. It's pretty much finished, but I can't decide his hair color. The last one has a lot of warm colors, but I still like it. Help! :P
@mongrelcat: Awesome stuff I think I like the one the right the most (color wise). Perhaps make the handle of the hammer a bit longer so we can see the other end between his legs, to break the tangent
I really need to stick to something now
I've fixed the head a bit. Glad to have an extra day to do it ^^
I'll be moving onto the next CHOW topic, but here's the direction I was thinking:
need to get rid of the line art now,
cool stuff here!