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September 1st, 2013 #1
Lydia's Quest for Artistic Competency!
Hello! I'm Lydia, 18, and going to college to be a teacher. I've been drawing since I could hold a pencil, but only semi-seriously for about two years now. I've never taken an art class, so my fundamentals are probably really poor. I do hope to make it into the professional art field some day, but I don't know how feasible that is.
I've been trolling the sketchbooks and other threads here on CA for a while now, but I've never made a post! Now I'm going to change that. I have seen some amazing critiques and improvement in others' sketchbooks, and I'd love to see the same in my own art!
Right now, I'm hoping to improve:
2. Expression and emotions through body language
3. Colors and values
Also, there maybe be periodic artistic nudity. Justsoyouknow.
And can anyone tell me how to add an icon to a post?
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Hi Welcome to CA. And bring in the art.
And to add an icon go to Attachments.
September 1st, 2013 #3
Her are some of my drawings from the last year or so, to give you an idea of my current skill level. All of these were done digitally with a tablet.
Some lineless, more realistic attempts:
And here is a self-portrait I did as practice. It was done using a mirror in two sittings, late at night.
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Hi Lydiamay, great work.
I feel something about the eyes. In some of the portraits they are too big and too close. But I like you choice of colors and the smooth touch of the brush. My favorite piece is that one with eyes closed. The face is gorgeous. You have talent. Keep posting here.
When I post something in your Sketchbook please return the favor visiting my Sketchbook also and tell me what you feel about my art. The link to My Sketchbook is in my signature. Thanks.
September 3rd, 2013 #6
Cojac: I definitely agree, my eyes can get too big. And thanks!
So, here are some quick doodles I made today while doing school work. They were all sketched in pen, so they're not super neat. I tried to use my own dogs as reference for the dog drawings, but they wouldn't sit still. So they're mostly sketched from memory. Then there was a picture of an owl in one of my textbooks, and they sort of took over!
And then, these are all from the last couple of weeks. I don't think I used any refs (minus my own hand for the hands), and the purple ones were all sketched in pen too.
Need to keep practicing!
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Awesome paintings, keep up the good work!
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September 13th, 2013 #10
Hey there! In my thread, you commented that your colors were weak, but I actually love the handle you have over yours. I would suggest that the values could be pushed more, but at the same time, I LOVE the soft quality you have to them I think you have a style going on. You're an inspiration to me to keep up with art, although schooling won't allow for doing it as more than a hobby for now. You're so talented for being so young, as well. Your sketches are full of energy and personality. Keep up the great work!
September 13th, 2013 #11
Really liking the female portraits, you seem to fall in the trap of drawing the same type face tho, its muscle memory me thinks, i like
your rendering and color, for years and even now me struggles with me colors lol not sure why, probably not enough practise still lifes
anyhow, thanks for stopping by my sketchbook I appreciate the comment, also your drawings are great and paintings to post more!!!!
September 14th, 2013 #12
Hello there! You have some really great work in here so far. I really love the mood in your color works. They feel very rich and comforting but with a touch of delicate melancholy.
I'm going to echo magicnmyth a bit here and say that your colors are very nice, but your values are lacking. It's possible that's actually the problem you're seeing with your color because you just can't get the right range of color if the values are off. The key problem is that you're only using a small section of the value range, specifically the lower half. The result of this is that your colors feel very saturated (because more saturation is possible in the middle of the value range than at the top or bottom), which is nice, but your images feel a bit flat and the subjects are blending into their surroundings. Consider making the subject a different average value than the background (ie a light figure on dark background, dark figure on light background, light figure surrounded by dark foreground shape against medium background, etc). You could also handle more form shadows to make the objects feel rounded.
Also consider whether the edges of your objects should be soft or hard, depending on the material, if the plane is rounded, how close it is the viewer, and how it's lit. In particular I see that you tend to make the jaw or edge of the face very hard which flattens the form and makes it feel more like a flat plane (like a piece of paper) than a rounded plane curving away from us in space (like a sphere).
I have for you here today not one, not two, but four little paint-overs! Okay the second one I just used auto-levels but I did do some painting on the first and last one. Hope that's helpful!
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