These are great!! Love the weirdness and the simple approach. Very interesting stuff you have going on
I think in a couple places you can probably cut out a few panels though, or make the storytelling a little more to the point. I don't read a lot of comics so am not sure what the norm for this stuff is, but that was the impression I got.
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