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    Dystopiana

    Been away for many years, but here is a piece I just finished. I'd appreciate your feedback to help me improve.
    Dystopiana

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    Beautiful piece!! Love ur comp, attention to detail and the palette is perfect!
    One little tiny thing thats bothering me a bit is the blackladder thing on the
    Right. I cant tell if its a foreground element or if its behind the landing strip.
    If its a foreground element then i get it because it does
    Frame your piece and puts more attention to the focal point.
    But im just kinda nit picking
    I think its justA quick value fix and ur piece will be pure awesomeness! !
    Keep it up!!

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    This is amazing!

    Graphic novel up and coming! Check it here at:

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    Wow, beautiful piece bexrex, I really like it! I'm putting this on my desktop background for sure:-)I think it would be cool to put some people in there, for example, some dudes near the fence watching the city or something like that. Again, great piece, would love to see more like these:-)

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    This is really cool! You picked a very good shot angle to portray this in. The only thing I would suggest is making that fence on the right side more opaque, since you can see through it. Other than that, any other changes would have to be design-wise, which is always up to the artist I really like it though.

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    This is great! i love the mood that your colors set. Some figures in the foreground, although done a lot, might add a little more story telling, but its still great without it. This image is top notch! I Ill be looking for more and hopefully learn a few things from you! Keep posting them!

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    Quote Originally Posted by bexrex View Post
    Been away for many years, but here is a piece I just finished. I'd appreciate your feedback to help me improve.
    Dystopiana
    What program did you use to make this?

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