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    A girl - C&C welcome

    Okay, today I finally picked up a pencil again.
    I didnt draw in quite a while...which doesnt explain the problems you'll hopefully point out, since I wasnt better than this before either...

    Well...yeah...so heres my girlfriend or at least what kinda looks like her if you have phantasy...

    I dont care weather it looks like her or not, but more about techniques as far as shading and linework is concerned.
    I suppose after years of doodeling I could as well try to figure out how to do it right.

    Geez...sorry I always explain too much!
    Here it is.

    A girl - C&C welcome

    Tell me where to start workin on my skills...
    Greetings

    chris


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    Almost 90 views, no reply.
    What did I do wrong?
    Prolly everything that could be said has been said a million times around here already, huh?
    Oh well..

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    I think the drawing is alright, but it's clear you need to focus on the fundamentals of drawing first. There's a ton of things in the drawing that could be pointed out for you to work on, but I think it would be best if you tried to start simpler (basic shapes) before diving into portraits.

    If you have access to a good drawing class, I'd suggest taking that.

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    Wink good work

    id say its over-all not bad, the shape isn't too distorted from a natural looking face(unless yoiur girlfriend is twisted, no offence ment) and its pretty smooth and shading needs to be smoothed, but i agree with A
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