Join 500,000+ Artists
Its' free and it takes less than 10 seconds!
Illustrating a promotional poster for a friend and his film short. Thought I'd get some critique on it. Still playing with the title but I'd like to get some impression of how it looks right now to see if I should consider some changes.
Not sure about how to improve the title. One thing I would consider to add som blurryness to either the background or foreground,depending on what is most important to present the story. I did some quick examples, but dont add blurryness to the point that you lose information
Once you´re completely satisfied you might as well quit.
I prefer the sign sharp and the car blurred. I think with the type if the O and A were the same thickness as the R & D it would look a lot better.
Thanks for responses. I've been trying to get on the site for a while. I'm trying out firefox aurora and I don't think that browser likes this site as I won't let me load the pages. Google Chrome seems to not have a problem though.
I like the idea of the blurring I think I'll try both ways and see if my friend likes it.
The text suggestion is good too. I think he want's me to try a different font but I think I'll be trying that as well.
Again, thanks for the help.