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June 30th, 2013 #1
Sketchbook - phome one - Gonne Kuehl - Critique me please!
Hello, my name is Gonne Kühl or phome one and
I am finishing my apprentice as "Mediengestalter" in Germany,
which is Kind of a Media Designer.
After having done that I would like to apply for game design studies.
I have been drawing for Years but just sketches wich never have been that super great. I have made some quite good canvases and
some cool projects,too like spraying a fighting jet and a big bus.
At the moment I am spending every second which I am not working
on improving my skills and building a portfolio.
At the Moment I am constructing my website, too.
Unfortunately I am struggling with some Bugs
and therfore my HP will be coming up in some time hopefully.
Now I wanted to start Posting some of the newer things I am most proud of in order to slam my new won confidence
and see on what I can improve, since I don't know anyone who does similar stuff in real life.
And therefore really would appriciate good critique quite a lot.
So here we go:
I made This one using some Photo textures and Painting in Photoshop The spaceships are an insect body I took a photo of when I sat on my balcony, today.
This bus-painting sadly had to be removed since the paint didn't stick to the foil we used for covering the glass But at least I have my photo
Hope it works this time really have been struggling with getting started due to the bugs lately.
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July 3rd, 2013 #3
The Juggling Mosquito - sketched that yesterday in the park after work an now threw some color onto it. Think im gonne push this further
And before that I started a background for I-don't-know-what-yet. Made the sky with spraycans. Unfortunately I had only left-overs in kind of one value range.
Could someone give me - besides the lightning, which im gonna start to work on tomorrow - some advice on composing the landscape? how do you guys come up with landscapes?
I thought of Painting a foreground element in the left bottom, where I would place the selling point - perhaps ome kind of funny character.
July 15th, 2013 #4
My first underwater environment.
I am looking forward to fill it with life.
Still figuring out the light of the spots
and thinking about what kind of vehicle
could emit that light.
July 15th, 2013 #5
And ... although nobody might read or look. A bunch of recent sketches.
Our dog which has passed away some weeks ago.
A picture sketchy canvas based on a photo of my little sister
Rocket Ape. Gonna colorize that on for new years eve
Turtle Man and swallow boy
Skull from steven rogers peck's human anatomy for the artist.
btw. does someone know where to find license free footage of skulls and skelletons?
A wolve to ride on, Some kind of perhaps it's gonna be a robo some time and stuff
Could this walk when swinging the torso like a snake? perhaps change the legs ...
July 15th, 2013 #6
And a Bug - first page of my first mid-tone sketchbook
... and the second page a guy on his raft.
And then on canvas still much to learn about rendering... would love to get an advice on that one.
July 17th, 2013 #7
July 22nd, 2013 #8
Here is a spaceship I started to render. I am not really shure about the 3D form. think i am gonna try a 3/4 view on that one to improve my understanding of its form to render it correctly. Does anyone of you guys have an advice design-wise or something that i don't see which strucks him or her?
This is the sketch i did in today's lunch break:
And this is the rendering i started this evening:
July 23rd, 2013 #9
started to paint this with spraycans today.
gonna finish it tommorow since i got tired after 3 hours in the heat.
July 25th, 2013 #10
July 26th, 2013 #11
Today I put my Bear into an Environment, which is a photo, I took some weeks ago.
And here a Monster I did a while ago:
August 12th, 2013 #12
Last edited by phomeone; August 12th, 2013 at 04:48 PM.
August 12th, 2013 #13
I perhaps want to render this one for my portfolio.
would you put the character in a more interesting pose?
Last edited by phomeone; August 12th, 2013 at 04:51 PM.