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    Give me some critiques

    I'm a photography student who is finished with my second semester. Let me know what you think of my work.

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    Very nice photos there photostudent. I really love the building shots.
    The only thing that you may want to consider is to choose a lower shutter speed on the shot number 4 and 10.
    Keep your good work up!

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    The architectural ones are great! The way that all the shapes are positooned makes a strong compisition.

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    Worms!! Anyway, very good shots, some of them contain very interesting value shapes. Is there anyway you can get around the noise produced in some of the dark shots?

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    I was using a mid range DSLR with kit lenses in most of the shots. I just recently upgraded to a 5D Mark III with pro level lenses. I could always go back but most of the images in the abandoned places were taken in an old brewery and the cops are really watching the place now. I could go back and re-shoot them but other than that the noise could not really be avoided on some of them.

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    I really like the photo with the worms in the MC donalds
    burger, did you eat it!? I like most of you photos but make
    them not so big when you post them!

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    The first crashed ice picture and the blurry woman in between the pillars I'd get rid off! Ah and the one with the filter!
    The rest looks pretty but you might want to do a bit more storytelling with it. Force the viewer to see the way you want them to see. I like the angles you are using!

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    Your work is really cool! I really like the abandoned looking interior ones. And the burger startled me haha.

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