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    Critique me pls :)

    I recently started working in photoshop and I need help to improve, please give me a critique on my work :
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    What do you expect to achieve with your work? It's important if you want an accurate critique
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    I'm trying to improve character concept work.
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    Then first you need to improve your basic drawing skills. Your anatomy doesn't read correct, and if this is not correct, no character design you may do will read properly. Forget about colour for a while. Take Andrew Loomis' "Figure Drawing for all its worth" and practice. And draw from life.
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    Agreed, draw from life as much as you can so you learn anatomy better.
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    Not bad. I like it. Define her legs a little more, their shadows look a little off.
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    thanks guys, I will definitely do lots of anatomy practice.
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