Ohmygosh! It's kinda silly how nervous I am posting this here... I'm a bit apprehensive that the style wont be well received or that I'm in the wrong place! But here goes nothing!
This is a picture I've been working on on-and-off for about a week now. I've posted this one DA and Gaia looking for critique but found both of them lacking when it comes to quality feed back. This is loosely inspired by a pin-up pose I happened across soo.... yeah. Yay! Pin-up demons!
Okay, so, I reworked the pose quite a bit, emphasize the S curve throughout the picture, adjusted the angle of the head and attempted to make the sexy read more clearly. I'm still struggling with the far arm/hand but, I'll be doing some reference searching later to hopefully fix this problem. I think I want to go with her touching the side of her face... not sure. Suggestions would be loved.