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    The elder pharos

    another pic for my lovecraftian serie

    after kaptain kooohk

    The elder pharos

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    Wow, man. Great organic shapes! Really good sense of atmosphere and ambiance. If there was one thing I'd work on, I guess it would be the inconsistant sense of depth on the second tower though. I love the way it sort of flows and fades away but I think the top of it is a little too articulated when compared to the tower in the foreground. They look as if they could be the same distance away from the viewer. I hope that makes sense.

    Great work. Your stuff never fails to impress me.

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    I like your colors, the detail
    of the image and the
    overal feel but...

    -here comes the critic-

    It looks a bit to flat you need to
    make more separations bettwen
    foreground and background so that your
    landscape gives a better sence of deep,
    with the use of less saturation of the father away
    you go near the horizon, and by using prespective
    lines form your horizon to really place up your image on
    a more three dimencional structure.

    keep it up and keep posting :chug:

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    Just visited you're web site and you have some beautiful stuff. I love you're still and colors.

    It's nice seeing some one with you're skills doing some awesome Lovecraft illustrations.

    later'
    scottg

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    Im feeling that far off structure, ill definately take a peek at the website.

    we all die....
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    Hi Viag, great work here !... i think you abstract style matchs lovecraft perfectly.

    My only comment is that the comp seems to be a bit flat. Maybe you can play a bit more with color variation to separate background.

    Great work, keep it up!

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    thx a lot gentlemen !

    yes pablo and maxetormer you re right for the flat side , i need to work on this , thx for the tips of the background saturation , i will apply this for the next pic

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