Hi, would like some critique on this one. I feel fairly stuck. Some of the main issues I kept wondering to myself was: is her hair maybe too big? Are the shapes too abstract? Is the image too static? Anyways, I was trying to go for a slice-of-life sort of image of an everyday thing. Except leaning towards anime because that's what I enjoy drawing in my free time. Was experimenting with trying to get a softer overall look as well. Any feedback would be much appreciated!