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    Planet, work in progress

    Hi all,

    I'd love to get some critique on this piece I'm working on. I haven't done a lot of painting/digital painting so I'd be great to get feedback on the use and choices of colors.

    Thanks!
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    It's always so hard to critique a cartoony style. You can only really say if it's working or not working.

    This is working pretty well. Is it for something? A game, or just an art piece, or what?
    I was once on the receiving end of a critique so savagely nasty, I marched straight out of class to the office and changed my major (sketchbook).
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    Mmm, that's an interesting point about critiquing some more cartoonish.
    This isn't for anything particular, just inspired by a love for maps (and also maps used in video games.)
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    It comes up a lot here. A cartoon is *supposed* to be different from real life, so what yardstick do you measure it by?

    I like maps, too. I have sacrificed whole Saturdays to Google Earth.
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