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    need critique: enviroment background for visual novel

    hi guys! i want to paint background for visual novel. the base is 3d modeling by my friend, so i just paint the colours and correcting the light and such.
    but i can't get the right colour and mood for it! i also include the reference of visual novel background style that i want.
    or maybe i need to start from scratch not from 3d model?
    any critique or tips? thanks!
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    There are a lot of issue in your lighting, you can start with a 3d image but always take care, 3d have it's own problems. Plus it's difficult to have a convincing drawing at the end. You need to work more on the rendering, add colors isn't enought you will need to flatten some part and so.

    But first : you need to start with a good 3d lighting if you still want to work with it. The one you have is all messed up, the light is supposed to come from the windows and door (where is the door by the way ?) so the shadow should be placed according to that.

    If your render have some issue getting the right light place, shoot differents renders then place tem in layers in photoshop.

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    thank your for your input! i'll fix the lighting.

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