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    nsfw - tits an trees

    hey guys, i wanted to rework one of my old drawings, and i ended up with the following. forcing myself to work on a small file so i wont get stuck noodling, so parts of it are (more) fuzzy (than usual) and wonky. id really love some feedback on the values, colours, composition and anatomy... hum, well thats about everything, now that i think of it. anyhow, would appreciate any crits.

    thanks a bunch!

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    Wow, this is going to be cool if you could sharpen the whole scene up. Introduce tons of slimy highlights, maybe some gore running down that....mound?

    Let us know what that mound she's split on is. Is it part of her body? Did she sort of meld with a tree stump? Is it poop? Clarify whats going on for the viewer, but i think its okay to let the side trees and back foliage stay open to interpretation, because the focus is the woman.

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    admittedly, it LOOKS like poop right now. its supposed to be a dress. was going for a rotten disney vibe, not sure about the birds yet but i figured i might as well give it a go.

    now the poop-pile is bothering me too O.o

    also, not sure if i should keep her skin a yellowish hue or make it chalky

    decisions, decisions...

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    think i managed to figure out the 'poop pile', aka skirt O.o

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    It looks way too photoshop-y. It looks like you are using only one brush. I recommend using a variety of brushes.

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