Hi! I'm 19 and trying to get a hang of the art thing by learning on the internet. I use SAI (for the most party) and usually the acrylic brush, although I'm kind of trying out new styles, both painting and lines.

There aren't a lot of places that I can get proper critique on my stuff - most places like to sugarcoat it. So I'd really appreciate honesty on what I need to do to improve, please. Thanks for lookin'.



Usual style is this:
Doodles from Vanhaydin
Doodles from Vanhaydin

and lately I've been working to get a simpler, more traditional looking style (although the more traditional-looking attempt is only the first one).
Doodles from Vanhaydin
Doodles from Vanhaydin
Doodles from Vanhaydin