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    I'm doing what I can to improve: gesture and blind contour, copying loomis and bridgman, drawing from reference, drawing commuters on the subway, drawing sculpture from museums. If I could get a model or find a life drawing class, I'd do more lifedrawing; for now, I use quickposes and pixlovely. 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    you're doing fine. Try to draw from life as well.
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    I really like the style you got going on here, but your faes seem really wonky to me, so I'd suggest continuing to study head anatomy. Keep the work up!
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    RissaKay Thanks for the comment. Do you see a particular distortion that is consistent across my drawings? Or are they each flawed in their own unique ways?
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    Looking good keep it going!
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    Thanks Cameronator. If you see any problems, please, point them out.
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    You are off to a great start. I am beginner myself....but one thing I noticed with your spheres is that the reflective light is too light...remember that the lightest part of the dark side, the reflective light, is still darker than the darkest part of the light side of the sphere. Also, with the reclining femal figure with the overswept hair, her head looks a bit small to me compared the rest of her body...maybe something to double check

    I really like some of those hand drawings you did and some of those action poses really give me a sense of the movement. I see you doing a lot of figure drawing...maybe you good to some still life drawings to change things up a bit.
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    Thanks amaranthxx. Yeah, the values on the outer edge of that sphere should be reversed; I was really frustrated with that and now I realize why. For the figure, I'm having some issues with proportions that I still need to work out. Another person suggested I work on my sense of value with a small object, like a piece of fruit. While I'm not really interested in doing a full still life, I think that may be a useful exercise.
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    Great stuff so far. Not much to crit that hasn't already been said. Just keep doing studies and keep at it in general!
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