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    Self taught concept artist seeking advice, critique and work... Thank you

    My name is Daniel Pellow, 29yrs, trained in graphic design and self taught in concept art looking to continually evolve my craft!

    I'm aiming to work within the games industry but certainly not limiting myself and am available for all design commissions and employment!


    Please leave any and all critiques... Thank you X

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    Hi Daniel,

    Nice start to your sketchbook, I like the last one especially - nice stylization. In terms of critique I would suggest working on perspective for a bit and trying to establish more sense of depth through a more clearly delineated sense of foreground/mid/background, the images feel a bit flat at the moment. Hope that helps!

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    Hey thanks Lightpunk,

    Thank you for the critique... It does help yes, and i too am aware of those points you've made. It's a slow progression but im slowly getting there. Im glad you like the last piece as this was a first for me! I was really pleased with how that one turned out. It was actually an art test i was asked to do for the company TEAM17 (worms)... I just hope that im on the right track to soon break into the industry!

    You have some very nice work yourself! do you work within the industry?

    Thanks again for the Crit!!!

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    Great work, You are painfully close to having a shot in the industry (well as much as the rest of us ave ) Like has been said, if you can work some depth into your pieces you are well on track then.

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    Nice work, I like the glowy effects!

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    the first one is definitely the best piece for me IMO, the lowest points are your sci fi stuff.

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