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    Revisions on Old Work

    I've taken some of my original work and made some revisions. Please let me know what you think of the changes.
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    You improved your handling in composition.

    But you need to review anatomy; the man's face is disproportionate, as if his face had been paralyzed while trying to give a kiss. You can also check how work the metal reflections and, texture of the planetoid, search references of how things exploded? Because these pieces are very large and very irregular, itís not credible.

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    Also, what does "ethicacy" mean? The word does not appear in any dictionary I can find.

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    It's a word; defined by John Hicks in "An Interpretation of Religion" as the ontological acts of an ethic that is inherit in of itself. Simply said--if Ethic were an actual entity ethicacy would be it's divine acts. That said, i was looking for a critique on the visual aspect of the new piece rather than remarks on my spelling and grammar.

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