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    Machovism

    Will someone critique this sketch? Please feel free to give honest and open feedback.

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    Do you have a reference? There are some funky things going on with those shoulders.


    I didn't think it was possible to be called an artist when you have nothing to say. It's like being a writer who publishes individual words as books and expects to be praised for it.
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    Evident lack of underlying structure. Plan your work in preliminary sketches, and make sure it is cohesive, not a collection of disconnected parts.

    The texture suggests you aren't really thinking of it. Decide what kind of finish you want; this one looks like you've been undecided all the way whether to use a brush or a chalk.

    The usual advice of studying the fundamentals with pencil on paper applies fully, too.

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