Soo... I'm starting a personal experiment for some original idea that comes from three colors, and as a result, I drew a mermaid kite girl. The black is there to show where I'd normally put the nose, mouth, etc. I dunno, at this point into the WIP it started to look weird. Also, the head seems especially large, even for a teen/child, but I guess it's okay if the drawing is a bit cartoonish. But still... Is there an huge empty spot?? Are all the kites being red and pink too boring?? Should breasts be added? Is the hair blowing too much?? GAAAAAAAHH.
So uh... yeah. Any critiques?