While, I've been working on this painting ever since I wrote a story for my "Imagining the story sort class" called "Berry". MY teacher had instructed us to ether create an illustration plan or draw a scene from the story. Well, so far it's not turning out the way I've had hoped. I've started to question if I should start over or try to fix the painting? Admittedly though I know I still struggle with proportion, human anatomy, and losing my gesture as I begin to build up the painting. I have hoped you guys here at CA can help me overcome my creative demons.
Anyways, here is an redline of issues with the piece I find my myself and next to it is a clean version so you guys can critique it (Sorry for my sloppiness I made the redline in a few minutes).
Any help is appreciated !
NOTE: I've not in love with the design if you have any critiques for that too,
Go ahead and post them.