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    Hi again, sorry its taken so long but here are more definite concept sketches.

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    1 basic elaboration on the favourite from the previous set

    2 giant child in a giant creatures mouth...

    3 Woman wearing a huge life sucking leech "fashionably"

    4 Woman siting with rock under water, circled by eel.

    They all tend to hint at suicidal tendacies but the ideas behind these four feel wider, (more informed maybe?) than the previous set. Can't stress enough how important your input on the concept is to me. This piece sets the tone for the rest of the series, I feel if the concept is good here the bar is set high. Thank you in advance for your consideration.

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    Here's the deal, Someone mentioned this earlier and I think they hit the nail on the head. When you think about sloth, you want to see a big, slobbering, slug of a being, not a sad slim female. Think about the other deadly sins, there way better opportunities to draw a pretty girl.

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    Thanks for commenting, Yeah I can understand that, sloth is definately not pretty girl material and of-course I think moving forward with any of these I'd have a gaunter look, (a lil ribs showing here a little cheek bone showing there). I see I may have fallen into the trap with the 3rd option but the concept I thought made for a better image with contrast of pretty girl and bloated slug. I am aware of the issue and will see to it that pretty is toned down in the detail and slothful is turned up when I develop the more favoured "idea".

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    When you were talking about cheekbones protruding due to neglect, it made me think of this:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0D75VEJyjxg

    maybe it can help, it's an interesting video nevertheless...

    also, I thought about the whole thing about slothful = not bothering to eat. I think that if you starve long enough, you get skinny, yes, but also gasses and other unpleasant things build up in your stomach and you'll end up looking skinny and bloated in the same time, maybe an idea to explore?

    Anyway, I love the concept of the 7 deadly sins and I'm eager to see what you come up with. Keep up the good work!

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