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    Spider Man Comic Page Skating On Thin Ice page 1

    UPDATE: Picture is updated.

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    pencil, ink and basic color done by me. I am still working on page 2-3.

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    Yo! Spidey got the Shakira/J-Lo boo-tay! Spider-ba-donka-donk in da house!

    Now that I've got that out of the way: it looks basically fine. If it were me I'd make Foreground Spider-Man about twice his present size on the page (and, obviously, also adjust the two Spider-Men in mid-jump) to force the perspective a bit more. Right now all four figures are close to the same size and it is flattening out the page.

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    I LOL'd.

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    I wasn't sure about that myself but thanks for pointing that out!

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    The last posture feel a little strange for me, something's not right. Someone that fall will not fall on his heels. With the movement swing you did to help the dynamics, I feel like Spidey will fall back because of that.

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    Name:  SpiderMan_SOTI_colorWeb_p001.jpg
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