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    Illustration for University Brief

    I really need a critique on this if anyone would be so kind, I did this in black and white then coloured it after, any advice is welcomed I want it to reach it's full potential, thankyou to anyone who provides useful feedback.

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    have you been spying on my room?????

    when doing things like the cover of the fan thing, and concentric circles in perspective in general you can draw it front on, using circle lasoo or whatever, and then free transform and distort into place and paint over it.

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    Hahaha it's actually meant to be my room inside of a computer to show how my life revolves around the stuff! Yeah I thought of doing that and editing the perspective of it but thought i'd challenge myself I'll work on it though, thanks for pointing it out

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    ok look at the way light bounced around in this environment (watch out for the shit photoshop jobs), itll help you figure out what it would do here. id suggest l;osing the beams from one window or the other, or it looks like you have two suns shining in.

    https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=du...Ioqw0QXo_YGwCg

    heres a quick guess
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    Quote Originally Posted by Velocity Kendall View Post
    ok look at the way light bounced around in this environment (watch out for the shit photoshop jobs), itll help you figure out what it would do here. id suggest l;osing the beams from one window or the other, or it looks like you have two suns shining in.

    https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=du...Ioqw0QXo_YGwCg
    Thanks for the link, I definitely need to do more studies of light and how it works, I'm going to have to leave the two lights (the idea was it would be in a room so two lights would theoretically be possible?) because of deadlines and everything, but again thanks for the advice and i'll definitely think about that in future

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    " I'm going to have to leave the two lights because of deadlines"

    fair enough, but you asked.. it would be possible to shine two very bright lights into a dusty room, sure, but why would you? really the sun will be on one side or the other and light flux through windows on that side will dominate ones coming from the shady side.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Velocity Kendall View Post
    " I'm going to have to leave the two lights because of deadlines"

    fair enough, but you asked.. it would be possible to shine two very bright lights into a dusty room, sure, but why would you? really the sun will be on one side or the other and light flux through windows on that side will dominate ones coming from the shady side.
    I know I asked, I am really thankful for the critiques man and I understand what you mean, thankyou for the example you made, I'm quite a visual learner, just here to learn and improve so I am thankful

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