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    Help needed

    Well, hello there once again.
    Yet again i need help, and i hope You guys and girls, can help me out.

    I'm drawing this poster right now and i can't get my finger on what is wrong with perspective in it (or what is wrong at all).
    I would generally appreciate any help given.

    First one is full comp, 2nd is my miserable try on making it look good.
    Cheers,
    AfricA

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    I am new here, but just some thoughts, and then hopefully some more experienced people can help you out

    First of all, what is the dragon doing? Why is it there halfway hidden behind the main figure? How are they related? What idea are you trying to get across? Right now, with the composition the way it is, it looks to me like the dragon is attached to the back of the figure, and the composition doesn't make sense. What are they both supposed to be looking at? Or are they supposed to be interacting in some way?

    Overall, I do like your color choices, but I have no idea what you are trying to express.

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