Need balls out critique. Hit me hard so I can improve. Maybe some tips?
The underlying drawing has major problems, mostly anatomy and proportion problems with your figures. It also seems to be stuck partway between realism and deliberate, cartoony exaggeration.
I like the way you finished it -- the frame, the shadow, the background. It's the kind of design thinking that will do you favors -- after you've brushed up your figure drawing fundamentals.
So, next time...thrash harder in the sketch stage.
I was once on the receiving end of a critique so savagely nasty, I marched straight out of class to the office and changed my major (sketchbook).
" Put the captain on the left into the girl's clothes and pose, and put her into his..."
the same thought crossed my mind. i agree with Stoat, when she says "It also seems to be stuck partway between realism and deliberate, cartoony exaggeration. "
lefty's eyes seem very far apart, baldy's face seems too big for his head, his drink looks like ketchup. girly looks like she needs the toilet. im not crazy about the drop shadow. it makes them seem cut from cardboard.
sb most art copied to page 1
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Ok, big thanks to all of you, will work hard on my figure drawing skills.