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    Cool first animation (critique required)

    Hello guyz!
    first time in my life i made animation for TAD contest on Deviantart C:
    I didnt win, but i got in semi-final) I am happy with that so much!
    I need constructive critique about composition. My anatomy not perfect, i am working on it.
    I need some advices how to improve storyline.

    tools used: | pencil HB / paper | colored - PT SAI | animation - PS CS4 |
    traditional animation

    Thanks to everyone!


    link on animation(impossible to upload here):
    http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...er-d5n1tph.gif

    Last edited by mintwinter; January 23rd, 2013 at 01:15 AM. Reason: can't insert image
    http://mintwinter.deviantart.com
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