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December 11th, 2013 #106
hard labor rolling over, here cool stuff avon keep it up your doing very goodE-mai:l email@example.com
Also, would be cool if you stop by my
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I like your study painting. This is really interesting to see your improve. Good job and keep it up !!!
December 12th, 2013 #108
hey Avon! great going there! you've made a lot of progress. hmm, I do think you should spend some more time measuring before you actually draw. espec when doing life pieces. close one eye and your your pen to measure distances. head height vs head width. tye eye position relative to the middle line. then check those on your paper. after that you can just fill in the blanks and your always safe. well, remember to remeasure after putting in the basic shapes maybe. I'll be back, see how your break-in into the industry is going
December 13th, 2013 #109
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December 15th, 2013 #111
Really good progress, keep it up!
Thanks for replying to my sketchbook!
December 16th, 2013 #112
p sage Thank you!
féfé73 Thank you!
ashess Thank you I will try that method! Thanks for stopping by
Flaskpost Yeah I can get a little impatient sometimes haha, have to slow down and focus. Thanks for the advice
Danny_KThank you I will
Falapoco Thank you!
So I hope this sketchbook isnt too boring to look through but I havent really been doing anything that appealing really, am starting to work on finishing things which is really challenging me and Im never satisfied with the results but I guess I just need to finish and move on to the next one and hopefully get a little better every time
But here are some quick female figure studies/gestures and some practice in drawing faces and I guess I could just as well put a WIP of the painting Im working on even though it looks pretty rough and pretty horrible at the moment.
Thanks for looking
December 19th, 2013 #113
yw. and im not bored. the 2 first images are not showing in that post, but I like the penciled lady's head a lot!
December 31st, 2013 #114
Nice line drawing portret Master studys look nice, but other works looks a bit disaturated, lacking contrast 15 year old ? Doing great keep going at it !
January 13th, 2014 #115
ashess Ah I'll try to fix that, and thanks!
Daumis Thanks I'll keep an eye on my saturation and contrast next time
So I traveled to Iceland for the holidays and didnt have much time for digital stuff there so basically just did a bunch of sketchbook stuff that hasnt been scanned yet, but here's a final for the first ''finished'' digital painting I've ever done, not as polished as it could be but I feel I can do so much better that I'd rather just call it finished and learn from it.
I dont like it at all since my workflow is all messed up and my knowledge of colors is limited hence the horrendous colors and it took more work and frustration than it should have but I guess you have to start somewhere
January 13th, 2014 #116
Avon! Your sketchbook is great! I just had to stop by in appreciation of you stopping by my sketchbook! I really loved seeing your progression. I noticed in your latest updates that your proportions are getting off track, don't forget to keep practicing your bodily proportions. You are doing so well, and you have much dedication! I am really liking the pink highlights on the latest update.
January 14th, 2014 #117
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November 15th, 2014 #119
AdrienneRose - Thanks! I really do need some work on my proportions hahah. Thanks for stopping by
Umbravita - Hey thanks! I really didn't work as hard as I should have but I did learn quite a few things. How did you like the camp?
Jablar - Thanks I will
So Im back, its been almost a year since I posted here and I thought I'd post here to get some feedback.
Been an interesting year, started high school and made some awesome new friends with similar interests.
Been trying step up my painting meanwhile so I would really appreciate some feedback
Here's one thats really close to finished but I just cant seem to get the surroundings to work, especially the sky and trying to achieve a sort of vibrance and atmosphere.
I would really like some critiques on this one.
Ill be posting some sketches and unfinished stuff later on
Have a nice one guys and thanks for looking.
Last edited by Avon; November 16th, 2014 at 08:28 PM.
November 15th, 2014 #120Registered User
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At this rate, you'll have no trouble breaking into the industry. Keep up the great work, and hey, thanks for the visit on my SB!
Critiques on your latest? Well, her head looks to be sitting too far forward on her neck. There are little things like that. Just keep practicing, and you'll get it.
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