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    Nice color studies, seems you are on the right track...
    I like the portrait sketch in #112, try to focus more on anatomy and proportions, construction of the face...
    keep going
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    AdrienneRose - Thanks! I really do need some work on my proportions hahah. Thanks for stopping by

    Umbravita - Hey thanks! I really didn't work as hard as I should have but I did learn quite a few things. How did you like the camp?

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    Hey guys!
    So Im back, its been almost a year since I posted here and I thought I'd post here to get some feedback.
    Been an interesting year, started high school and made some awesome new friends with similar interests.

    Been trying step up my painting meanwhile so I would really appreciate some feedback

    Here's one thats really close to finished but I just cant seem to get the surroundings to work, especially the sky and trying to achieve a sort of vibrance and atmosphere.

    I would really like some critiques on this one.


    Ill be posting some sketches and unfinished stuff later on

    Have a nice one guys and thanks for looking.

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    At this rate, you'll have no trouble breaking into the industry. Keep up the great work, and hey, thanks for the visit on my SB!

    Critiques on your latest? Well, her head looks to be sitting too far forward on her neck. There are little things like that. Just keep practicing, and you'll get it.
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    Thanks for the comment on my sketchbook. Yours is looking pretty good! definite signs of improvement, keep up the great work.
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    Hiyas Avon! Thanks for stopping by btw! Cool sketchbook you've got here, improvements has clearly been made since the start of it.

    For crits on the last painting, if you want more vibrance and saturation you could always CTRL + U and increase the saturation that way. You could also increase the amount of different hues in the picture to get some vibe, right now you're having 2-3 different hues. Play around with complementary colors such as Red VS Green, and Blue VS orange etc. With hard work and dedication, by the time you're as old as me you'll be good as hell! So keep it up!

    Lycka till!
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    Hey guys!
    Been painting loads since the last post but the majority of it are things that I'll never finish hahah.

    Here's an update on what I'm working on right now, having serious trouble moving forward with pieces that I want to finish. Some tips about how to move forward with paintings are really appreciated.

    Until next time

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    To be fair I am terrible for that too, always get fed up before the final stages, but one thing I do find can be helpful, is just commit an hour, or even half an hour to the painting each day, if nothing else it helps you slowly make progress, but usually once it starts taking shape more you will find you are happier to start spending more time on it again. Worth a shot
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