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    noob here!

    hi i'm new! woot!

    well here's some pics i just did... c&c plz?




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    Hye, good stuff, I like the first one alot, it's very clean and deserves to be colored. The knees seem to be a little too far down, if they are those big circles.

    The second one is also good. His pose looks very painful to do though. When his whole body is at a 3/4 angle his feet should not and cannot be facing completely front. Also, you forgot to finish the sheath.

    Its looking good, I'm just telling you what I see, not trying to be nasty or anything. Keep up the work.

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    those are cool.

    i didn't notice the knee thing until you mentioned it.. i guess it doesn't seem that odd that her thighs are long because her hands are huge.

    anyway, very cool. post more! (i know you have more)

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    One thing that really sticks out is the pecs. They just sit there in the middle of the chest. The pecs should connect to the humerus and slide under the deltoid. It should connect to the shoulder.

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    thanks for the crits everyone! they help a lot... (feel free to add more!!!)


    i'll post more stuff soon :waves:


    and the unfinished looking parts (the sheath) on the second guy are mainly from scanning it and turning up the brightness


    i do intend to color the first one though! so keep checking to see if i've done it yet!

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