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    Ice Mage Wip

    Not really happy with this, any opinions??

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gragg View Post
    Not really happy with this, any opinions??
    1. Go back to your "Fire Mage" thread.
    2. Copy all the comments people made on that thread and paste them here, because everything said about your "Fire Mage" picture is equally applicable to this one.

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    Giacomo- Lol, yea I guss I could do that.....just wanting some opinions I guess. Added some more color / detail.

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    the High contrast of where the hair hits the neck is extreme. I would lighten it up. Also the pose looks very symmetrical like you mirrored her arms. I like that you have one leg bent more and coming forward a bit. The ice crystals are nice. I think overall she needs a more dynamic pose. Also, add some gravity to her boobs. Looks like they're floating or she took a trip from iceworld and stopped by a cheap plastic surgeon in Hollywood. Overall I like the feel of it. Also, the wind tornado things that trail off of the orbs seem too solid. Let a bit of that darker blue background bleed through and it will look more airy and magical- like the ones spiraling down her legs. The hands need work. Hope this helps.

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    Thanks Maggietoh! Awesome critique!

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