Ronald Fong's Sketchbook

**minifong** · January 19th, 2013

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**minifong** · January 19th, 2013

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X-Men 2: Clone Wars : a platform game developed by Headgames and released in 1995 by Sega of America for the Mega Drive/Genesis as a sequel to a 1993 side-scrolling video game X-Men.

**minifong** · January 20th, 2013

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**minifong** · January 20th, 2013

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**ForScience** · January 20th, 2013

Thanks for posting, this is some really fun stuff. I have a really simple suggestion for your rendering. Keep all of the planes that are facing the same direction the same value. It keeps your form more cohesive. People will understand what is going on with your vehicle a lot better.

I did a really quick paintover of what I mean

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also look at Toph Gorham's work. He really is the best at this sort of thing http://www.tophgorham.com/

**minifong** · January 21st, 2013

wow! thanks for the paintover! I'll keep that in mind!

**minifong** · January 21st, 2013

So sorry, I'm sure this is pretty disappointing! oh well...
Hahaha! I've got so much to learn!

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**minifong** · January 21st, 2013

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**anendlessvoyager** · January 21st, 2013

I think you getting better, but I think you need to loosen up a bit. Maybe do some more pencil figure drawings, I find that often helps. It really helps artists to just loosen up their drawings and capture the raw energy.