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    Lol -fanart - C&C welcome

    Hi everyone. Its been quite a long time since my last post in this section.

    I was painting a League of legends fanart and I am getting close to finnished.
    At this point I am not sure how I could actually improve it. I think the composition works rather well, though not entirely shure on that one, as I am looking at it for too long now. ^^

    Compared to the very strong light, the shadow would have to be darker I guess, but then the atmosphere of the piece would be lost.

    SO, any reasonable critic ? I am open for everything.

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    Lol that's a very nice one, love the rammus and the lee sin ahah
    I don't see anything that could be a problem, but I'm not the most qualified when it come to this point .

    The only little-little thing I would improve is the left (our left) knee of Shyvana, the shortcut is a little strange at this part, I think it miss one shadow spot to define it for good. And the line around the ghost at the foreground is orange on the body and black on the arm : it "cut" the arm from the ghost...

    For everything else I have nothing to say it's great !! Very nice lighting and I really love the way to mix the colors to give the sunny mood !

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    Very nice^^ Is it for the LoL fanart contest? I was thinking of trying something aswell, but with this sort of level, It's gonna be rather for fun than hoping on an actual prize Nevertheless it indeed will be fun^^
    But about the painting, I feel like shyvana could use some more (3d) detail compared to the rest of the painting. furthermore I really like the green dragon

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    I think the left leg is a bit off. Not sure how, really. It just appears that way to me. Also, maybe the eyes could have something to look at, instead of the shield. Lastly, the sword hand? A bit too small for the depth. I wish I had more definitive feedback for you. But I'm still learning too.

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    I think this is working well. You've got the darkest darks, the lightest lights and the most saturated colors on your principal figure in the center, so even though there's a lot going on, it doesn't feel busy.

    I was once on the receiving end of a critique so savagely nasty, I marched straight out of class to the office and changed my major (sketchbook).
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    Really love the art style you got here.

    I think you're really close but one thing I see can help create more dynamism is to better frame the characters. To keep your attention on the red swordswoman what I think you should try doing is to 'close off' the top right corner of the picture (add a bit of the purples you already have on the other corners, and also up the contrast on the plant's leaves) and also crop out the bottom part of the picture which I feel is a bit empty and detracts from the action.

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    Thanks to all the ideas. Here the final version I think.

    I slightly cropped the image in heigth so that there isnt so much empty space at the bottom.
    The light corner in the upper right has been reduced.
    I added a very faint greenish color over the back around her. Making the red and yellow pop out a bit more/ pushing the rest back
    The ghost in the front has been lightened up and the orange outline has been added to the arm.
    Minimal adjustments on some armor parts, to show more dimension

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    That's very nice !
    I have a little request : do you think you can make her sword passing behind the horned helmet ? I think that will help a lot understanding her swinging move !

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