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    Stoner

    This is an image of a character I created for a screenplay I am currently writing. He is the boyfriend of the main female character and actually gets murdered by the villain of the screenplay.

    I basically want to know if there are any problems with this image. How is the coloring? How does the character design look? Does it look bad?What can make it look better?

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    Is there any particular reason why the hands are so large?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dumb Naked King View Post
    Is there any particular reason why the hands are so large?
    That's just my style of drawing.

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    I can say youve nailed the look; cardigan, half-dazed expression, have you been spying on me?? Doesnt look much like a spliff hes smoking tho, more a small cigar. Also not sure about Stone Rape studios!! ;0

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    Looks a little angry to be a 'stoner'


    Stoner Ape studios or Stone rape studios? (have a real think about that one…)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Venger View Post
    Looks a little angry to be a 'stoner'


    Stoner Ape studios or Stone rape studios? (have a real think about that one…)
    Stone Rape Studios. LoL. Nah. It's Stoner Ape Studios. It's my imaginary animation studio.

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    I took that to be the intense. myopic stair of the man whos spent a lot of time playing videogames in dark rooms

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    If you're going to cartoon like that you need to begin learning line weight primarily for that style, and practise keeping things consistant, its really important for cartooning well.

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