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January 13th, 2013 #1
Little late to the starting line... PLEASE CRITIQUE!!
I'm a bummy looking 22 year old student and just really starting at the art game. It is what I want to do with my life and I am going to work hard till I'm at par with the best so PLEASE help me get there. Be harsh and brutal with your critiques, I can take it and I want it.
Thank you in advance for any replies, they are helpful.
Last edited by pusateap; August 8th, 2013 at 12:12 AM.
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Hey Pusateap, welcome to CA, you're not alone, I'm 22 this year and trying to get into the game, we will both get there I promise. As for critique, I recommend cleaning up your lines. Can't wait to see more from you [=
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January 13th, 2013 #3
Hi! Is never too late!
Looking at the guy who is on his back on the floor, I sense that he is flat. And the one with the... Ballet, or stretching pose, the arms are too long. And since you asked about shoulders (a question that I also have), I'm studying Loomis and Bridgman for that!
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January 13th, 2013 #4
It’s good to see that you aren’t afraid to try drawing different poses. Personally, I’d recommend looking at more basic poses in order to get a clearer idea of proportions etc. A mixture of photo reference and art books should definitely help!
January 13th, 2013 #5
The pose on the upper right's head doesn't seem to properly connect with the rest of the body. In other words, I concur with what Orali has said.
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January 13th, 2013 #6
Thank you guys SO much! Right now I'm checking out Loomis and Bridgman and there is so much good information that its making jittery! Also poses, anyone know where I can find some? Found this interesting website: http://www.posemaniacs.com/, but would still like some others.
January 13th, 2013 #7
Heya! Welcome! I'm also 22 and just starting to get into the game now. We'll get there! Just keep posting.
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January 14th, 2013 #8
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January 14th, 2013 #9
Forearm notes and practice and a little bit of legs.
January 14th, 2013 #10
very nice start man and good luck with your goal keep up and you will improve thats for sure use the spine for aligning properly the big masses head torso pelvis i find it some times to start with the pelvis try it out it might help ya get some orientation on how the rest of the masses are aligning,other than that post moar
January 16th, 2013 #11
More arm doodles and a puffin. They make the silliest sounds.
Also thank you guys for the help and input, it's awesome.
January 17th, 2013 #12
Late night hand and arm studies.
January 17th, 2013 #13
Hi and welcome!
I suggest you try to do sketches and doodles on regular pen and paper as well, it helps to speed up the process and the understanding of shape and form.
It's always recommended to create using more media than one. So make sure your digital drawing gets company of analog drawing! Keep it up!