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    "Lava Dragon WIP " Need advice on completing this artwork.

    This is something I started drawing due my free time today morning, It's a lava dragon & feels that it's almost finished but I still feel something missing in it. I would like to have some feedback on how I can improve this more if possible, any advise is greatly appreciated, thanx for stopping by.

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    maybe make him shoot something with his fire!

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    Maybe more/brighter lava and less sunlight. Kind of distracting I think.

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    I agree, try bumping the contrast abit. Making the dragons guts pop, and perhaps drag out the reflective light bouncing off from the illumination of his stomach.

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    Thanx for the feedback, I will try out more tweaking on it

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