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    girl with sword...

    i have no time during summer wchool to do anything at all, but i did sneak this in for a sec, i did have more in my sketch book but i left at a friends house, so this is it...pleace C&C (i dont like the left hand, its funky to me, oh well)girl with sword...

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    hmmm.. the legs aren't quite correct. a bit longer i think. and the left hand is slightly too big (i think).

    the rest is good, you've got a kewl cartoon-like style!

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    hey thats rad, the detail is really solid, and the shadings great too..although i do agree with twisted nail on the legs, but other than that it seems pretty good. :chug:

    doh!
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    Sweet work on the upper half. Her knee should be about where her ankle is, tho. the hands look pretty good to me, perhaps a re-angling of her thumb on the left - that part does seem a bit... odd.

    Other than that, great work.

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    i have changed stuff on here like the arm and legs, hope its beteer, didnt want to spent anytime at all on this, oh well....girl with sword...

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    the right knee and lower right leg are still a bit awkward, too small i think. the rest is ok now!

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    Knees looks tiny i think. But besides that, this is awesome. Really sexy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Twisted Nail
    hmmm.. the legs aren't quite correct. a bit longer i think. and the left hand is slightly too big (i think).
    I can't see her left hand though. Anyway, I like the style but what I also like to see in a drawing is feet. I like to see a drawing from head to toes, wanna know why? I used to draw from head to halfway down the shin because I simply couldn't draw feet. So now I have this trauma that makes me believe that YOU can't draw feet aswell. But hey don't worry 'bout it I'm still the victim here.

    My dick isn't small. Its just foreshortened
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