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    Icon My Artlessness( Improving)!!

    Hey guys, as my old sketch book was nthing more thn a DUmp due to bad picture quality and huge image size, i decided to start fresh, maybe from your criticism and help i can improve better. So i will post some of my things now, starting from Old to New. And i will try to keep it updated as much as possible.
    And I'M gonna receive my tablet soon so Digi Stuff incoming!
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    Some more stuff, CC welcome ^_^

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    I would really like to see more of those life drawing. They look very nice. Good work mate, keep on posting.

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    Well i think people didnt quite had any crits to write. But that doesn't stop me from posting. so here's more :-

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    Try to get better lighting for photographing your work, or find a scanner. That last sketch in red looks good; nice values. The Harley chick is wobbly, I'd invest some time in Posemaniacs. Good luck!

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    @AJM, thanks for those kind words, yea m working on gestures and will do post thm as soon as i find them promising, and about imge quality, i will get a scanner soon and i will post more after that only. cheers!

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    re uploading some old stuff + New One
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    Amazing! The picture quality and sketching is very nicely done....You have done good changes in your work

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    Hey bro welcome to CA, keep us posted!

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    @aaron2 - wow tht really motivated me, thanks
    @Jiri92 - hey bro, thanks and i even checked out ur SB, u got some cool stuff in der.

    So here I am posting some more stuff.
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    Wonderful work, and thanks stopping by my work.

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    That last face looks awesome man. The woman gives off a bit of a giraffy vibe though, is that black near her armpit supposed to be her dress?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jiri92 View Post
    That last face looks awesome man. The woman gives off a bit of a giraffy vibe though, is that black near her armpit supposed to be her dress?
    thanks jiri, yea tht black part was supposed to be her dress, the reference model itself was bit wierd so i had some difficulties to draw her.

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    Hi, sufferest, m glad that u liked them.

    Here is what i did today
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    And A SELF PORTRAIT \m/
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    some random shit
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    Good stuff so far - you seem to have a pretty good eye for proportions and tone which is a big hurdle in itself.
    I think it's time to hit the advanced books for you - crack out the old anatomy books and start doing focused perspective studies and you'll be a rock-star in no time!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rhubix View Post
    Good stuff so far - you seem to have a pretty good eye for proportions and tone which is a big hurdle in itself.
    I think it's time to hit the advanced books for you - crack out the old anatomy books and start doing focused perspective studies and you'll be a rock-star in no time!
    Hey thanks for the encouragement , but if u could do me a favour then pls name some books on the stuff you mentioned.

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    sorry for being away for sometym, i was busy with some stuff.
    Here is wat i did in the time being :-
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    critique it please, i really struggle with coloring values ;(
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    Wo, it feels like i was kept away from CA fr ages, sadly due to server problems i cudnt post more of my work, so here it is :-
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    Yeah CA was hacked, I read somewhere. I like the scene with the orc, you're gonna expand on that?

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    Maybe i could work on that in extra time but for now m concentrating on perspective and some good portfolio pieces for FZD.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Artful_Stool View Post
    Maybe i could work on that in extra time but for now m concentrating on perspective and some good portfolio pieces for FZD.
    FZD as in the school of design?

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